Good morning again, Payson, how are you? Greater job on your thorough observation and application of bone and muscle anatomy of the figures. Keep up this practice.
These don't seem enough in terms of exaggeration and satire of the forces and lines of action. Why don't you please free up your arm with 1 hour of 30 second gesture sketches of the anatomy? The reason why you could do this is because, your simpler shapes and designs will be able to be more clearer and simpler in their statements.
Take what you will from this.
Good luck to you, and I hope these things have been completely and totally helpful and beneficial.
再次早上好，佩森，你好吗？ 对您的骨骼和肌肉解剖结构的彻底观察和应用更重要。 保持这种做法。
这些在对力量和行动路线的夸大和讽刺方面似乎还不够。 你为什么不用 1 小时 30 秒的解剖姿势草图来解放你的手臂？ 你可以这样做的原因是，你更简单的形状和设计将能够在他们的陈述中更加清晰和简单。