Working to get more loose and free lines

by Naima, April 15th 2023 © 2023 Naima

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 60 seconds in length.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form


Besides asking for critique, can you tell me how to use the shortcode e.g. where to use it?

Polyvios Animations

Well, well, well, Naima? Greater pacing and expression with your lines of flow, as usual, yet, I'm not looking at enough of the more bigger pictures of each of these poses yet, yet how would you like to please go ahead with 30 minutes of 20 second quicker poses? (90 scribblier attitudes)(1800/20=90)

The logic for this criticism is because of two different things: First of all, it can get you in touch with the bigger picture more, 'cause it's fun!; second of all, to help you make your attitudes a lot more stronger like never before, but it's all part of what animation and cartooning work, because they're also fun. If you wanna learn some more tips and tricks, then I'd recommend you the 2 PDFs of the Walt Stanchfield books.

Good luck, and have fun with your greater learning curves.


Dear Polyvios Animations, I really want to thank you for your continous critics which so fare has pushed me foreward. I am driven by the idea to find my lose lines and to continously keep going. Your forum is the first time ever I dared to ask for critics and I realise how much it can help to be open minded to constructive visions. Thanks so fare for putting all this efforts in viewing and all the book/ video suggestings. Have a wonderful day.