(part 1) 1 hour class type figure session, asking for feedback

Good evening, Meiji, and once again, you're making greater progress on the flow and rhythms of the human bones and muscles and poses, I think, but I feel that they all could've been broken down more into bigger, simpler shapes more. Would you like to go for 32 more minutes of 2 min attitudes?

The logic behind this constructive critique is so that you could get a more than bigger picture of the human structures of any and every kind. For more further details and info, please look into 2 videos down here. 👇

https://youtu.be/0I_egPHop9A





https://youtu.be/LQQXCJvy36Y





Good luck to you and your industrious march of progress. Thanks.

I see your proportion of leg and hands are not matching! try drawing your gesture with joints so to figure out the height of each part such as hip to knee, knee to ankle.....i like how the flow of your sketches... keep it up!