by Shockwave, March 23rd 2024 © 2024 Shockwave

try to slow down and not fuzzy with long line

Aunt Herbert

Looks beautiful, good shapes, the proportions are on point, the lines are clean. I especially like the way you indicated shadow shapes on the left one.


Wow, you captured the gesture PLUS muscles so well! You definitly added a lot of depth to your piece while still being able to make it look loose. The model on the bottom right looks good, but the proportions are a bit off. The torso seems to be much bigger proportionally than the rest of the body - essentially, the head and legs are too small for the size the torso is drawn. Additionally, the right leg might be too small. I understand it is farther away, but I think the perspective is pushed too far back. Figure to the left is super well done! Only notes are maybe make the head bigger and the calf on the left leg less prominent.


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