nov 1 2024

looks good but you need to focuse less on the outside figude and work of how the body is bent and how everything on the body is a attached to eachother and the way its facing :)

you have a good eye for like the proportion of things and i can tell you spent some time separately on each of the parts to make sure of that, but it might be helpful to push/exaggerate the rhythms from the figure so that it also helps you think of the figure fitting together "globally." as for the character of the lines themselves, it would help to draw long, continous, lines, rather than short lines from your wrists--it'll force you to think more about the larger figure whic helps with finding the rhythm.