Critique on 5 min drawings

Any advice is greatly appreciated!!

Haha well, I've made this trying to critique your drawings and I don't know if I actually did that. I don't have time for retakes so this'll have to do. I hope it's helpful in a way! XD

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Thank you very much!! I actually didn’t erase any construction lines, they were just never there ? i’ll make sure to work on that!! And, weirdly, i’ve never held a pen or pencil with a normal writing grip! My pencil sits on my ring finger, with my thumb completely wrapped around, touching my middle finger. Hurts way less! But thank you again!! That was extremely helpful, and i’m iust about to start another set, so i’ll make sure to work on everything you’ve mentioned!!

I’m glad you found it helpful :-)