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  • #500

    I am not very sure how to post photos so i hope this goes ok

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    #2395

    one of biggest concerns is that my proportions are always out of wack even when i am looking at a reference

    #2397

    Sanne
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    Hi guijinci!

    I'm afraid I can't see any of the images. Can you try uploading images to a different image host site, for example http://www.imgur.com ?

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    #2406

    They look really excellent

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    #2407

    Thank you!

    #2410

    These are great, especially the last one with the model on the floor. All of them have good weight and really stand out as individual compositions. Really awesome!!!

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    #2412

    I agree with the others.

    The middle pose in your first picture seems odd at the hip joint. I feel that the back part should be slightly longer

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    #2416

    Thank you so much!!

    #2417

    Thanks for the critique, IJ, I totally agree

    I will keep that in mind next time:)

    #2419

    You're up for a good start! Your line work is very controlled and clear. There's room for improvement though. You seem to focus a lot on the contours. I would like to see how you handle the figure in relatively longer time limits, say 3-5 minutes. While 30 sec drawings are a good exercise, especially to warm up, that's too little time to really analyze and understand what the body is doing.

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    #2420

    Thank you! Yes i focus on the shape of the body. I did post a couple longer poses with the same package (there are a couple 1 mins, 5 mins, a 10 min, and a 25 min at the very end of the album)

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