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  • #77

    hello there.
    my name is anass saidi but you can call me (Flappy)
    i'm a student and in love with digital painting.
    and here is my tumblr and my deviantart:
    http://flappyart.tumblr.com/
    http://flappy-anass.deviantart.com/
    please feel free to take any other artwork you want and critic is the much you can.
    i'm gonna start with this one here.

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    #928

    Technically a nice job. The flow or rhythm of the composition is a bit unsettling as is the theme. I see an expression of a soul with anxiety and pain, and some paranoia. Forty years ago I wanted to express my inner torment through my art. Now I find a joy in trying to discover and capture the hidden beauty in all the common things about me.

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    #929

    oh thanks.
    i'm still working on my sense of composition with reading some of the andrew loomis books.
    the beauty is hard.

    #937

    Love it but i feel like the shadows are a bit too big.. but overall awesome job

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    #938

    oh yes. thanks you. i took too much time on the shadows to get them right.
    hh there was too big than this :).
    may be because the moon was too big that i couldn't get them right.

    #970

    I really like the atmosphere of your drawings, it works well. Realistically, yes, the shadows are probably a bit big. But I like how you did that, it adds to your specific style, makes it different, and helps the atmosphere. I personally really like it that way; anything to distinguish an artist from another one.

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