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  • #3853

    Hi there,

    These days my friend told me about this site, and I found this is awesome and I can improve my skill here. I'm drawing like every day, so I post my drawing. I want to be an artist, so wish your critique.

    I welcome any feedback.

    Thank you,

    Maho

    • Maho edited this post on May 21, 2019 8:44am.
    • Maho edited this post on May 21, 2019 8:46am.
    • Maho edited this post on May 21, 2019 9:08am. Reason: Trying to upload my images well ^^;
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    #3854

    Have you tried the tutorial yet? I can see you’re using class mode, that’s definitely a good idea. And you’re trying to include hands and feet, also good.

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    #3857

    Hi Torrilin,

    Thank you for your comment!

    Do you mean improving technique on this site? I'm glad I'm on the right way :)

    This is what I've done today. I didn't include other 30 secs, 1 mins nor some, because these were terrible :/

    #3859

    Hi,

    It's difficult to draw quickly! Today's drawing :

    #3860

    Next question: in the drawing you’re doing each day, can you find things you think you did right?

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    #3861

    Hi Torrilin,

    I found the tutorial page today! 😅 I did it for the first time, and I'll do tomorrow too.

    At some point, I find I did right, but basically, my lines are ambiguous. Maybe if I use a pen, it'll be more clear. For instance, about today's 10 min woman, her left leg is obscure. Mainly about 5 min man, his shoulder and legs are hard to be understood. I tend to focus on details too much!! That's why it takes too much time for me to draw.

    #3863

    Not the wrong parts, we all have loads of those.

    A big part of how we make progress is finding the parts that are right and good. If you can’t see even a line you like, it’s a bit hard to do better. If you’re sure everything is wrong, maybe try picking out the best one out of each time group? It doesn’t have to be good, just better than the other ones.

    And finding the tutorial is great. I think it’s a very helpful starting point. And it’s worth reviewing basic ideas every year or so, to see if there’s anything new you can apply.

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    #3865

    Hi Torrilin,

    This is today's drawing :

    I showed which line I like with purple lines. Still not perfect, but I try to increase these lines much more :)

    Yeah, the tutorial and articles are so useful. I'm trying to set the goal everyday.

    Thank you!

    #3867

    Today's :

    #3871

    My croquis note came to the last page, so I used my tablet today.

    #3873

    Hi,

    These days I set my goal to 'draw in confident and fewer lines quickly'.

    • Maho edited this post on May 27, 2019 2:00pm.
    #3876

    Today's drawing :

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