Yamikumo, these are quite good. I know that's not a critique, haha.
Is this the whole study that you did for the day or did you do longer poses too? I would love to see the longer pose if you had them. I'm used to doing poses ranging from 30 seconds to 10 minutes. So I find that when I'm given poses of longer lengths like 30 minutes or hour poses I can feel a little lost as to what to add to the pose. ("What else is there to do?? I already blocked shading. How would I take this too the next level?")
What I'm saying is it would be interesting to see how you add to these dynamic and flowing frames.
Thank you too for being able to share your work with us. That takes guts!
Yeah, Yamikumo. I really love your gesture figures so much. I know that's not a critique, but I love those figures.
If I was to give you a true critique, it would be that I'm not getting enough caricature into your line quality. Why don't you draw with just your shoulder, with very bolder and more confident contours, in 5x59 second scribbles, pretty please?
The reason is because, you'll become much, much, much, much more decisive into your linework, and least stiffest. Hope that it will be accessible. Take care and stay more safer.