4 minutes 9/1/19

by Emmamora, September 2nd 2019 © 2019 Emmamora

Hi everyone! My name is Emma and I'm new to the line of action community! Please let me know what you think of my first session here! I'd love any pointers!

Done as part of a 1 hour class.

My current goal is: Fluidity, volume, action!

Krinmu

Pretty Good! I would say you should try going over your lines less. This causes some really thick sketchy parts. Your linework actually does seem great and you really should be more confident in it, at most just go over an already drawn line once or twice. I feel if you do that, you can get a lot more breathing space from general neatness and have a larger focus on fluidity than trying to correct lines by blacking them out with more lines.

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