1 hour figure

by Emmamora, September 2nd 2019 © 2019 Emmamora

My 1 hour figure from 9-1-19! Please let me know how I can improve!

My goals are: motion, fluidity, action, volume!


Hi emma!

This drawing is amazing! I wouldn't be able to draw something like this, so I'm afraid I'm in the wrong position to critique you here

If your focus is on fluidity and volume, I think you're doing great! Every line you drew helps give the drawing motion and volume; almost as if the shadows could move, and the lines were 3D!

The only small detail I noticed was the hand below his body; compared with the rest of the drawing, it seems to be the part with less fluidity in it. The lines around it seem to hard, so it kind of pops up in your eye when you first look at the drawing, as if it had more volume than the rest of the drawing.

Again, great job! Hope you can critique me instead next time,


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Hi Noodle! Thank you so much for your comment! I really appreciate you taking the time to analyze my drawing to help me out!!

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