figure drawing from line of action
I love the perspective and shading! You've captured the forward movement perfectly, something i really struggle with myslef. Fingers on the model's right hand look a little long but thats all i have to say critique-wise!
Thank you for your inciteful critique. If you want to show perspective in you drawings you need to make things close to you larger & things further away smaller (remember the telephone poles or the railway tracks pictures). Works with figures.