done on 10-06-20
what should i focus on?
It would be beneficial to you to put some time into hand studies, and if you're comfortable, some nude model reference to see how the human body forms underneath clothing, sometimes building a character by going straight into clothing rather than laying out some kind of fleshy skeleton can lead to the body or pose looking unnatural. Keep up the good work! You've got plenty of room for improvement but you will make great strides in time. :)