day 35- girl

by Jordankinsley, October 11th 2020 © 2020 Jordankinsley

clean up of my practice before work.

Mvster

I love the elegant vibe you went for in this! If I were you, I'd work more on action/gesture and proportion, then you'd be on the path to success!

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Tx Williep

The figure works well. The wrist on the right arm needs to be narrower. You are getting better. Keep up the practice because practice makes better.

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Jayke

Hey Jordankinsley, I can see you've worked on this. I think the movement in the eyes is great and shows expression. Look to exaggerating the movement in the body and capturing expression through body movement. Ways you might do this is imperfect lines and greater definition in body parts

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