Figure Olga_1© 2020 Tx Williep
Olga #1 pencil with color pen color added.
Sorry, but I do not know what you are talking about. Too pointy? Give me a break. Get you glasses fixed.
Nicest work on your figure, txWilliep, very least stiffest yet. Very, very, very solid and fluid. (with some liveliness) Plus, I've got one tinier recommendation: see some of the subtle energy in that pose above? Why don't you do 38 more minutes of 30 second poses coming up next, thru these two books to look for: This one, and this one, too.
The reason why you would go for these things, is because, your muscules and bone structure will become even more vital, and even more and more energetic in your current goal.
Hope they've been completely and totally convenient.
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Look at the (from our perspective) left arm. The elbow is too pointy compared to the right elbow. For that reason, it sticks out too much. But you can easily fix that. Furthermore, practice and understand the shape of feet. Also try to compare the size of right and left limbs and also keep in mind how far they are away from our eye/camera. Good luck