Im looking to get better at proportions and and overlaping shapes
Great job, Sensei-seb,
Greater job on your nude torso sketch. I love those proportions and angles. I think that you're on the right track. I feel that you've got a good feeling of proportions. But I've got one smaller, tinier, and littler suggestion: I love how much littler movement going on here, but why don't why don't your please draw more livelier poses, in 5 minutes of 30 second poses? Oh, and why don't you please check out this link here?: https://line-of-action.com/learn-to-draw
The reasons why??? The reasons why are because of two factors. a) to be more broader with capturing the essense of the poses. b) It'll help you out more on knowing the value of a quick sketch. It's OK if you don't finish the quick pose for 30 seconds or less, so that it'll help you capture the heart and soul of the poses. My hat's off to you, and I hope you've found this totally and absolutely inviting.
Thanks for the great critique, i would love to see the link you sent me on how to draw, but it seems like it dident come out quite right as i couldent reach the page.
Sorry 'bout that, but this link came out a bit too wierd.
Don't know what to do.
Sensei, let’s hope this link works...?
I really like the form! Your way of sketching looks impressive. Was curious if this was a 1 minute sketch or a 30 second? That may help figuring out what to focus on with your proportions.