I am slow but critique - I do want improve
Good luck on your 5 minute pose, Hayun, that's very solid in the graphic shapes and the graphic spaces.
I've had a tiny, smaller issue in the relationships. Specifically, the body relationships look, or seem pretty off, and generally, they look a little bit right. Would you please like to be more bolder, and the most gutsiest with 2 minute poses for 10 minutes of your work?? The reason why you would and could do this work is because, it can not only help you on making your drawings less stiffer, and more fluidest; but it can help you polish and refine your understanding of the human relationships (proportions and angles)
My hat's off to you, and I hope you've found these completely and totally beneficial and concrete.
Thank you for the suggestions.
What I like about this drawing are the dynamic lines, but you could still practise proportions and shading. Try using geometrical shapes when sketching, it really helps to keep the right proportions of the drawing. Keep up the good work!
Dont focus the shadow and details, try to simplificate everything as geometrical forms and shapes.
Thank you very much. It is hard for me not to get into details if anyone has suggestions I would I appreciate your time to share.