5o min sketch no shading. Tried to focus on upper body proportions

by Rashuneagle, February 3rd 2022 © 2022 Rashuneagle

Done as part of a 2 hour class.

My current goal is: Better understand human anatomy, so I can render imagined poses


The body is too long, and it makes the arms look too small.

The shape of the leg is good, though.

There needs to be more form on the arms -- the muscles there aren't present.

The head looks two-dimensional, there needs to be more depth, like the back of the head.

The lines on the torso show form and I like them.

-This is my first critique so take this with a grain of salt.

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David M

Your drawing is good, but it would be better if you use less time in your sketch. Start with more general shapes and focus on get the right proportions.

Though, I really like your sketch

Senshi Hashira15

Te recomiendo que pongas enfasis en la construcción de los brazos para mayor detalle en los musculos, asimismo, se puede mejorar la linea donde la cabeza está ubicada para mayor dinamica.

Polyvios Animations

Good evening, Rashuneagle, how are you doing tonight? Greatest job on our lines of action and expression lines and intense organic drawing and formsa and shapes in the bone and muscle structures. Keep up your greatest works ever.

But I've got one tiniest suggestion: I really love your intensity of the forces, but I'm not getting enough of the mix of forces with the forms and details, but other than that, you're doing the greatest. Kindly free up your arms with 5 minutes of 60 second poses. As a result, your human anatomy will get to be the least stiffest and the most dynamic energetic, fluid and memorial, especially in your memory and imagination drawings of poses, hands, feet, faces, and expressions. Keep practicing. Good night.

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