Let me know if there's anything I should improve on!
These are looking good! They both read pretty well, the one on the right has great dynamism in the forms. It's really good! I'd say for improvements, maybe start practicing more forshortening. The kneeling/resting pose looks good, but with more confidence in that area it would read even better. Keep up the good work, can't wait to see more of your work in the future!
hai i'd maybe recommend practicing line confidence and lighter strokes!
you seem to have many short and hard strokes which could slow you down,
although even with that you have still captured fluid movement!
i could also be wrong on this part, but maybe use more basic shapes like prisms/spheres more before working on the outside details! important 4 gesture drawing and basic anatomy, i wasn't able to see any i the torso which is why i mention it