focused on more consistent line
it's pretty good, i understand the pose pretty easily, try the geometry form for your construction and you can relax a bit your hand for giving a pose more free and spontaneous in your pose.
Say, Brilicol, and nice job on your range of forms and gestures in your figures and gestures, yet I'm not getting enough of the most consistent possible line, but please keep on loosening up your flow and fluidity of gestures and forms with our interactive drawing tutorials right here.
The logical arguement why you could and would do this constructive critique is because of two things: 1) To refresh yourself on gesture drawing in general, in addition to quick sketching in general. And 2) to make your forces less stiffer and the most spontaneous, alive, and motivated from within.
My hat's off to you, and godspeed to you this Holy Week and good night to you and good luck to your greater marches of progress.