A woman with a hula-hoop

by Tommy V. Lavi, May 9th 2019 © 2019 Tommy V. Lavi

The upper part of the body looks great and the overall dynamics is caught very well! I suggest to work more on the lower part, the lines for proportion should help

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My favourite lines in this piece are the ones you drew for the hula hoop; they're very soft and fluid and capture the shape well. I think the rest of the body might benefit from a similar approach, rather than the shorter, harsher lines that you're currently using.

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Tommy V. Lavi

Thanks for the advice!


Looks really good

the rib cage looks a bit small, I find myself doing this too

overall really good!

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