by Emmamora, September 2nd 2019 © 2019 Emmamora

Hi everyone! My name is Emma and I'm new to the line of action community! Please let me know what you think of my first session here! I'd love any pointers!

Done as part of a 1 hour class.

My current goal is: Fluidity, volume, action!


Looks amazing to me :D


It looks good! but ankle/foot broken and flat in my eyes, unsure about the foot behind, do you draw thrugh??? imo you contor line is too strong and give it a very stiff look, almost like stone especially thighs maybe focus on the shadows and using more x contors to show volume. are you using a stomper or fingers to smudge your shading? you are sloppy on shading that cast shadow is ruining your beatiful figure. hope you the best


amazing critique! Thanks!

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