by Puck, August 17th 2020 © 2020 Puck

This took way longer than I wanted it to, mostly due to difficulty shading. I really struggled with shapes that were partly obscured and detail in general. Any advice is much appreciated!

Tx Williep

Very nine (good) hand. The fingers grasping the pencil are excellent. I can not see you did anything wrong or how you could improve things. You can do more hands (which most people find hard) in Line-of-Action. I would like to see you expand into figures. Start off with stick figures to get the action of the figures. Then you can fill them out into a full-blown figure. Keep them simple in the beginning. After you feel comfortable, you can expand your efforts. I know you can do it, you have the ability to do it. Practice makes better.


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