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by Zet2908, October 17th 2020 © 2020 Zet2908

Done as part of a 1 hour class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Aliencommando

(First time giving a critique, sorry if the feedback isn't helpful)

You have reached a good point with stick figures, the proportions are pretty good and you can clearly tell what each pose is meant to be despite the lack of detail. The next step would be to try more with larger shapes (figure furthest to the right has a bit of this an it's easily the best one)

Also, I cannot tell where the hips/waist are in some of the poses, it would look better if one of your starting lines was marking where the waist is (and what angle it is at). This would help as well with attaching the legs nicely.

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Zet2908

Thank you for your feedback, I will pay more attention to larger forms next time and make sure that hips line is visible :). Your advice helps me a lot.

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