by Akikoma, January 25th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.



My first lenguage isnt english, so sorry if this message is a little hard to understand, but, wanted to give a critique.

I like how you captured the gesture of those hands, they i can almost see and understand them. that been said, hands are hard!, i feel like in some of them there is some problems whit the structure and form, like, they file a little to flat. maybe i would recomend to go to look for hands photos and try to break them down in some dinamic but solid shapes and forms, take your time, really understand them.

I know that i am still far from been good at drawing but i hope that my insight could help you get better.



Thanks for giving me the first critique you do!
I will refer to your critique.

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