by Akikoma, January 25th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.


This looks awesome! Great job.

I think a good improvement would be trying to see things more in 3D instead of just trying to define them just with the outline. Try to use your line work to suggest in which direction your masses go or were the planes are facing.

Hope this helps!


Thank you!
I'll try it!

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