by Akikoma, January 29th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.


Your contour lines for a beginner are very proficient! They could be made even stronger by varying line weight ( lines closer to the observer being thicker, those further thinner) I think you would also benefit from quickly drawing a line to represent the angle of the shoulders and hips, then proceeding to fill out volume of the subject

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Thank you!

I'll refer to it!

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