by Akikoma, January 30th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Nice work on your drawings, akikoma, very great.

Again, I really think you've done a great job on your body and foot proportions, but, if I was to give you a critique on your drawings, then it would be to say, that a couple of hand gestures have a mite of rigidity. Why don't you please do 96 minutes of 60 second (1 minute) poses of hands? And do you know why???? It's because, it can and will be beneficial to your understanding of the basics of rendering, particularly on drawing the hands' movements.

Good luck from me, and I hope it's been completely and totally prepossessing and encouraging.


Thank you !

It is true that I am not doing a good job of depicting hands and feet in my drawings. I'm going to try to practice drawing hands and feet.


nice layout of the basic shapes that make up the whole of the body!

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Thank you!

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