by Akikoma, February 2nd 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Hello again, akikoma, nice work on the solid sketching of these heads.

Well, if I could just provide you a commentary on these, then they would be, that I don't feel enough looseness and liveliness on those expressions and faces. Why don't you please free and loosen yourself up with 119 more minutes of 26 second poses of head angles???? (119 x 60/26, 7140/26= about 275 poses) The reason why you could do this critique is because, it would, could, and should help you out on your goal of rendering caricatures and exaggerations.

My hat's off to you, and I hope you've found this completely and totally beneficial and educative.


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