by Akikoma, February 2nd 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Nice work on your hands, akikoma, but I've got on tiny suggestion. I love how much forces and forms you've got going on there, but I really don't see enough animation on those gestures. Why don't you please lighten yourself up with 103 more minutes of 29 second hand poses? And do you know the reason why?? It's so that you'll get a lot more stronger feeling in your hand gestures.

Good luck from me, and I hope you'll find this absolutely and totally nice and accessible.


Thank you!
I'll try it soon.

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