by Akikoma, February 3rd 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Nice work, akikoma, way to go on those poses!

Well, if I was to suggest you something on your study of basics, then I love the looseness, then I don't see enough of the T.L.C. (tender loving care) Why don't you please free yourself up, with 107 minutes of 2 minute poses (107/2=about 54 minutes)? The reason why you could do this clever game is because, it could aid you on understanding of the human proportions.

Cry to you, and I hope you've found this completely and absolutely chatty and encouraging.


Thanks for the critique.

It's a training of 54 repetitions of two-minute croquis.

I'm going to try it next time I have time.

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