by Akikoma, February 4th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Marvelous quick sketches, akikoma, hello there!

Again, if I could get more fluidity in this critique, I would say to be even more fluid and more livelier in your line economy, by doing 109 more minutes of 29 second poses of hands and feet? The reason why is because, it would, could, and should help your line renderings be the least stiff, and the most, dynamic, energetic, fluid, vital, and lively. My hat's off to you!! Keep up the great work.


Thank you. I'll refer to it.

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