by Akikoma, February 5th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Exceptionally excellent work on your heads, akikoma. Exceptional work on your face.

My total advice would be to please work on your expressive expression gestures, by doing 108 minutes of 28 second poses? The reason why you could do this is because, it would, could, and should help and encourage to make your faces less stiff and more light, longer, larger, looser, and livelier.

My hat's off to you, and I hope you've found this completely and positively enlightening.


Thank you!

I'll refer it.

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