by Akikoma, February 6th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a practice session with poses of 60 seconds in length.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.


Each part has a line, but from what I'm seeing, the overall line of action is missing, which would draw the ebb and flow of the image. Blocking out the shape of the body is really good, but if you gained awareness of overall line, the poses would become less stiff. This is really good, and keep up the good work~


Thanks for the critique.

I will refer to it.

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