by Akikoma, February 12th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Hey there, akikoma,

That's a very good job on how expressive and exaggerated your gestures are. That's stunning work! Well if I have one small suggestion, it would and could, be this: I feel that I really don't see enough exaggeration in the poses. Why don't you please make them more cartoonier, by going with 116 minutes of 30 second poses???

The reason why you could go with this freeing approach is because, it will help you become more fast and efficient in your caricatures and exaggerations, of gestures. My hat's off to you; keep it up!!

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