by Akikoma, February 14th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: I don't know! I am an absolute beginner; I'm here to study the basics of rendering

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.


Both drawings has caught the expressions in the poses. They both seem alive.

In the drawing of the adult model the balance between upper and lower halfs seems slightly wrong, upper part of the body seems a bit dominant, and bit too large, in relation to the lower half.

You should continue and add shadows in order to show substance and weight.

Keep up the good work


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