by Akikoma, February 15th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Hello, and good morning, akikoma, nice job on those quick stick figure poses. Very lively, and never stiff-- like stick-figure-stiff.

Well, if I could help you provide a critique on your sketches, I must say, that though some elegance are really emerging in each and every mannerism, but I really don't see enough of them. Why don't you please, make more lighter and longest lines, by drawing 121 minutes of 28 second attitudes?????? (121 x 60/28, 7260/28=259 miens) And you know why? Because it would and could help out on making your lines of action, and lines of rhythm, more stongest, and more powerful.

Good luck to your studies and practices, and I hope you've found this completely and totally intuitive, productive, and useful.

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