by Akikoma, February 15th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Lock Smith

Concerning your efforts in capturing the correct proportions, you seem to be doing well and if time allows it you should focus your efforts in hinting the idea of the shadows that appear on the body. Just by adding a thicker lines or drawing where the shadows are, you can give this effect.


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