by Akikoma, February 18th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Wow!! Nice solid drawing in the poese, akikoma, way to go!!

Again, I was to provide you with some totally sincere and honest commentary, it would be this one: I love how solid the bodies are, but I really don't see just about enough fluidity and life in those sketched poses. Why don't you please work out on drawing them out with your shoulder, instead of just your wrist, by doing a session of 126 minutes of 29 second poses?????? (126 x 60/29, 7560/29=about 261 pose sketches)

The reason why you could do this critical suggestion is because, it would and could help out on making your solid poses least stiff, and the most organic, fluid, energetic, and liveliest. Good luck to you, and I hope you've found this completely and absolutely productive and leading.

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