by Akikoma, February 20th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

That sounds marvelous, akikoma, that's very outstanding of your quick sketches.

So, if I would and could provide you with an honest critique, it would be that, though I am enjoying your lighest touches to your lines, but I really don't see and get enough of those looser and long line works. Why don't you please take my advice, of going thru 125 minutes of 25 second air drawings????????? (125 x 60/25, 7500/25=300 pose sketches) And do you know why????

The reason why you would, and could go with this idea to refine and polish is because, it could and should help you out on your new goal, and that is to help out on making your drawings solidest, fluidest, liveliest, and none the stiffest.

Charmed I'm sure, and I hope you've found this completely and totally beneficial and tending to artistry and creativity.


ですから、もし私があなたに正直な批評を提供することができれば、それはあなたのセリフへのあなたの最も軽いタッチを楽しんでいるけれども、それはそれでしょう、しかし私は本当にそれらの緩くて長いラインの作品を見て十分に得ていません。 25秒の空中ドローイングを125分通過するという私のアドバイスを聞いてみませんか????????? (125 x 60 / 25、7500 / 25 = 300ポーズスケッチ)そして、あなたは理由を知っていますか????

このアイデアを洗練して磨くためにあなたがそうする、そしてそうすることができる理由は、それがあなたの新しい目標を助けることができ、そして助けるべきであり、それはあなたの図面を最も堅固で、最も流動的で、最も活気のあるものにするのを助けるためです。 最も硬い。


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