by Akikoma, February 20th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Great job on your long, 10 minute drawing of a pose, akikoma. That's very good!!

Again, if I was to suggest you a request, it would, and could, be this: I love the forces working together with your forms, but I really need, and want to see more and more and more, and more of the forces. Why don't you please draw the longest lines as possible, by going for 124 minutes of 25 second drawn acts?????? (124 x 60/25, 7440/25= about 298 attitudes) Well, do you know why???????? It's because it would, could, and should help you out on making your outlines more, and more longer and to help you out on sketching the largest strokes, most confidently and boldly.

My hat's off to you, and I hope you've found this completely and totally beneficial, productive, and productive of you.

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