by Akikoma, February 23rd 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.


You are doing a great job of capturing the action line of the movement. I would try to get the proportions down quicker. You can draw the shapes that the negative space makes to help you.


Really nice gestures! I particularly enjoy your heads, super delicate yet contain a great deal of information. Great work!


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