by Akikoma, February 23rd 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Say, that is a mighty fine job on those solid poses, Akikoma! Those are very greatest!

Again, I said, I've got one small, tiny suggestion for a critique. I love the strong but deliberate rhythms you've got there, but I think you've been a bit more descriptive with your lines just as enough. Why don't you please kindly render out a pose or two with 8 lines only each; by practicing 133 minutes of 22 second attitude sketches?????? (133 x 60/22, 7980/22=365 warm up poses)

The reason why you could, and should go with this approach to refinement is because, it can and will give you longer, fastest, and furious rendering, in order to better skip the slower analysis.

My hat's off to you, and I hope you've found this completely and absolutely beneficial, helpful, and encouraging.

Polyvios Animations.

P.S. Be sure to check out a copy of a PDF of Glenn Vilppu's Drawing Manual.

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