by Akikoma, February 23rd 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Cool job, akikoma, cooler job on your solid and weighty and balanced pose there!

Well, it I could and should, help you out even further on your critique request, then it would be that some of the proportions are a bit too rigid, or stiff. Why don't you please lighten yourself up by drawing longest, and larger lines of rhythm in your human bodies, by going for 125 minutes of 25 second attitides drawings????????? (125 x 60/25, 7500/25=300 pose sketches) Why???????????????? It's because, it would, and could help out on making your strongest lines of action very lightest in the touches, in terms of the overall human proportions and angles (human relationships). Good luck.


ええと、私はあなたの批評の要求をさらに助けることができ、そしてそうすべきです、そしてそれはいくつかの比率が少し硬すぎるか、または硬すぎるということでしょう。 25秒のアティチュードドローイングを125分かけて、人体に最も長く、より大きなリズムのラインを描いて、自分を明るくしてみませんか????????? (125 x 60 / 25、7500 / 25 = 300ポーズスケッチ)なぜ???????????????? それは、全体的な人間のプロポーションと角度(人間関係)の観点から、あなたの最強の行動ラインをタッチで非常に軽くするのに役立つからです。 がんばろう。

Kanaiyah Ward

hi.I critiqued you before

good job!! you even got the muscles in.


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