20210303_5min _4min

by Akikoma, March 3rd 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Excellent job on those solid poses, akikoma!

Still, I think you're doing sweller on those movements and line quality on those poses, yet I really need, and want to see even far more of these. Why don't you pretty, pretty, pretty please go for 136 minutes of 19 second attitide sketches?? (136 x 60/19, 8160/19=429 practice sketches)

The reason why you would, and furthermore, could go with this approach to refinement of the forces is because, you could render most of the poses in 8 lines each--or less--, then you'll be able to get a lot more stronger looseness and even all-natural appeal to your sketches.

Lucky break to you, and I hope you've found this completely and definitely beneficial and informative.

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