by Akikoma, March 4th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

Great job on your pose, akikoma, that's very solider! Very, very solider!!

Yet, my advice is to say, that I love the gesture, but the it's just a little bit too contrived to me. Why don't you please breathe easy with 139 minutes of 17 second sketches of quick poses??? (139 x 60/17, 8340/17=491 quick sketches of figure practice sketches)

The reason why you could do this piece of advice is because:

This exercise teaches your brain to see the figure as a whole, rapidly identify the essential essence of what makes a pose interesting, and sets you up to be a strong visual communicator.

Not to mention the fact that it can and will teach you to draw less slicker and the most rawest in your attitude notes.

Have a nicer morning and I hope you'll find these completely and totally beneficial and informative.

あなたのポーズで素晴らしい仕事、アキコマ、それは非常にしっかりしています! とても、とてもしっかりしています!

それでも、私のアドバイスは、私はジェスチャーが大好きだと言うことですが、それは私には少し不自然すぎます。 素早いポーズの17秒スケッチ139分で安らかに呼吸してみませんか? (139 x 60 / 17、8340 / 17 = 491フィギュア練習スケッチのクイックスケッチ)





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