20210304_5min

by Akikoma, March 4th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

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Great job on your pose, akikoma, that's very solider! Very, very solider!!

Yet, my advice is to say, that I love the gesture, but the it's just a little bit too contrived to me. Why don't you please breathe easy with 139 minutes of 17 second sketches of quick poses??? (139 x 60/17, 8340/17=491 quick sketches of figure practice sketches)

The reason why you could do this piece of advice is because:

This exercise teaches your brain to see the figure as a whole, rapidly identify the essential essence of what makes a pose interesting, and sets you up to be a strong visual communicator.

Not to mention the fact that it can and will teach you to draw less slicker and the most rawest in your attitude notes.

Have a nicer morning and I hope you'll find these completely and totally beneficial and informative.

あなたのポーズで素晴らしい仕事、アキコマ、それは非常にしっかりしています! とても、とてもしっかりしています!

それでも、私のアドバイスは、私はジェスチャーが大好きだと言うことですが、それは私には少し不自然すぎます。 素早いポーズの17秒スケッチ139分で安らかに呼吸してみませんか? (139 x 60 / 17、8340 / 17 = 491フィギュア練習スケッチのクイックスケッチ)

このアドバイスを行うことができる理由は次のとおりです。

このエクササイズは、脳に全体像を見て、ポーズを面白くするものの本質をすばやく特定し、強力な視覚的コミュニケーターになるように設定することを教えます。

それがあなたの態度のメモでより滑らかで最も生々しいものを描くことをあなたに教えることができそして教えるという事実は言うまでもありません。

より良い朝をお過ごしください。これらが完全にそして完全に有益で有益であることがわかることを願っています。

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