by Akikoma, March 11th 2021 © 2021 Akikoma

Done as part of a 30 minute class.

My current goal is: Improve at correctly capturing the overall proportions of the human form

Nice to meet you. I'm participating from Japan. I would be very happy if you could give me a critique. I'm not very good at English, so I'm using translation software to write this text.

I may not be able to write a good reply, but if you give me a critique, I would like to refer to it.

Polyvios Animations

I love how sketchy and scuptural your long pose was, akikoma! Nice going with your line quality and proportions there!!

Again, my advice is to say that why don't you please make your proportion and angle lines more longer and large so far; by using Timer+ app on your iPhone (iPod Touch) with 155 mins of 4 second scribble exercises on really cheapest drawing paper?

The reason why is because, it's to be able to free and be more looser in your relationship's freedom of movement, caricature and cartooning.

Cheers, and good luck to you.

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