Greatest job on your longest, 10 minute poses, citrus0418. Greatest job on your length of your drawing of the forces, forms and details of the figure poses.
My tiniest, smallest and littlest assessment is that I think that your gestures and actions are definitely on the righest track. I feel that there's not enough of the cartooniness, animation and organicness in the lines of action and rhythm. Would you like to be able to do 3 599 second poses, from a custom timer????? (9 minutes, 59 seconds) (all normal and flipped vertically)
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